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Skii30
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Username: Skii30
Post Number: 176
Registered: 04-2008
| | Posted on Wednesday, May 06, 2009 - 07:32 am: |   
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Hi
Just wondering if someone will proofread this passage for me please. Go raibh maith agaibh
"Mar a dúirt mé cheana is scéal simplí é le Gaeilge dheas shimplí ann. Is féidir leat a lán rudaí dheasa a dhéanamh leis an leabhar. Tugann an leabhar seans do na páistí dráma beaga a chur ar siúl. Beidh an drama bunaithe ar na charachtair agus an scéal. Is féidir an scéal a chur in ord le pictiúr nó focail. Beidh na páistí ábalta chluichí beaga a imirt cosúil le “Cé mise” nó “Cluiche Cuimhne” Is féidir leo cárta aitheantais a scríobh do Ruairí, Sinéad, Bn. De Brún. Mar is eol duit tá réimse leathan leabhar ar fáil do bhunscoileanna. Thar aon rud eile is gá go mbeadh na leabhair taitneamhach agus simplí. Agus ní ceart “obair bhaile” ná “ceachtanna foirmeálta gramadaí” a bhunú orthu. |
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Lughaidh
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Username: Lughaidh
Post Number: 2863
Registered: 01-2005
| | Posted on Wednesday, May 06, 2009 - 01:36 pm: |
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Cheartaigh mé na rudaí a rabh cuma mhícheart orthu agus chuir mé tráchtaí ina ndiaidh.
>"Mar a dúirt mé cheana is scéal simplí é le Gaeilge >dheas shimplí ann. Is féidir leat a lán rudaí deasa a >dhéanamh leis an leabhar. Tugann an leabhar seans do na >páistí drámaí beaga a chur ar siúl."
+ not sure "a chur ar siúl" is the right expression there...
>Beidh an dráma bunaithe ar na carachtair agus ar an >scéal. Is féidir an scéal a chur in ord le pictiúir nó >le focail.
a chur in ord? cad é atá i gceist agad?
>Beidh na páistí ábalta cluichí beaga a imirt, mar le “Cé >mise” nó “Cluiche Cuimhne” Is féidir leo cárta >aitheantais a scríobh do Ruairí, do Shinéad, do Bhn. De >Brún.
identity cards?
Learn Irish pronunciation here: http://loig.cheveau.ifrance.com/irish/irishsounds/irishsounds.html & http://fsii.gaeilge.org/
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Skii30
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Username: Skii30
Post Number: 177
Registered: 04-2008
| | Posted on Wednesday, May 06, 2009 - 05:32 pm: |
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Lughaidh,
Go raibh maith agat.
Identity cards: What I am trying to say is that the children will be able to write up identity cards describing the characters. It would be a written exercise for them to practice their Gaeilge
A chur in ord.= Taking pictures from the story and putting them in order. ( Ar dtús Céard a tharla? agus ina dhiaidh sin...etc etc) |
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Lughaidh
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Username: Lughaidh
Post Number: 2864
Registered: 01-2005
| | Posted on Wednesday, May 06, 2009 - 08:20 pm: |
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Identity cards > not sure it's right to use "cárda aitheantais". These are the card you have in your wallet and that you must show to the gardaí if they make you stop etc. I think another words should be used for what you want to say.
Maybe "Is féidir leo cárda eolais a scríobh faoi Ruairí, faoi Shinéad....."
A chur in ord > I'd say "Is féidir an scéal a athchoimriú le pictiúir nó le focail". (to classify pictures > pictiúir a rangú)...
Learn Irish pronunciation here: http://loig.cheveau.ifrance.com/irish/irishsounds/irishsounds.html & http://fsii.gaeilge.org/
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Skii30
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Username: Skii30
Post Number: 178
Registered: 04-2008
| | Posted on Thursday, May 07, 2009 - 03:44 am: |
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Great go raibh maith agat |
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