An bhféadfá cuidiú a thabhairt dom?
I'm simply looking for final confirmation(or denial!)of the correctness of the following translation. I appreciate all of the help so far, now I'd like to bring some sense of closure to this so that I can find my 'locus amoenus' before an Bhliain Úr! Grmma!

1. A ghrá ghil bí páirteach liom f(h)éin
2. Is go háirithe dá mb'fhéidir liom scríobh
3. Bheinn ag gáire Le bánchnis na gcraobh
4. dá bhfaighinn áirithe ó éinne cé hí
5. níl a cairde ró-shásta liom féin
6. Chun áras a dhéanamh ná tíos
7. Ach ma tha is d'reir raite MO bheal
8. In nair dom a leamh duit ce hi.

1. Join with me, o bright love
2. If I were able to write (which I'm not) as you are,
3. I would be laughing w/ the dearest fair-skinned one
4. If I could know for certain from anyone who she is.
5. Her friends are none too happy with me
6. To settle and to keep house
7. But if she is as I say
8. I'm not ashamed to tell you who she is