Cummings3793
Member Username: Cummings3793
Post Number: 3 Registered: 09-2008
| Posted on Tuesday, January 18, 2011 - 04:44 pm: | |
I wrote a few poems for my creative writing class, and I wrote a couple of them in Irish. My teacher did not try to translate it but I still got credit. They are sort of prose but in stanza form. I'd like to hear any opinions. Thanks. Táim beo táim ag scríobh seo mar tá fíos agam a ní thuigeann tu Gaeilge ní feidir liom insim seo duit as Béarla ach ceapaim atá grá dhuit agam táim ag damhsa agus ag lui ar an tolg leat Táim beo táim ag feiceáil agat do suil chonaic me thú agus táim ag feiceáil gach rud Táim beo leat Táim beo ná abair "tá brón orm" beidh sé breá i t-am, beidh me go maith Táim beo and then my other poem (significantly shorter) dónn tú mo anam chomh géal le oir chomh ólta le beoir tá grá dhuit agam |
Aonghus
Member Username: Aonghus
Post Number: 11231 Registered: 08-2004
| Posted on Wednesday, January 19, 2011 - 04:04 am: | |
I'm afraid the grammar is not very accurate; you have got the order badly wrong in some cases. Táim á scríobh seo mar go bhfuil fhios agam Nach dtuigeann tú Gaeilge Ní féidir liom é seo a insint duit as Béarla Ach ceapaim go bhfuil grá agat dom etc. |