I saw Carmanach gave an assessment of someone's Irish, so I thought I would see if he could point out some of my errors. I read a chapter of Mo Sgéal Féin at
http://www.corkirish.com/wordpress/archives/1353 - you can listen to my MP3 on that page by clicking the button and then reading the text below. I am not sure I have slender r right, or not always, and I think my c's and g's come as slender as standard (as in English - our c's and g's are slender in English) - but there are probably a host of things I haven't identified. Overall it sounds like an Englishman speaking Irish, but I think that is just partly my voice... Don't worry about being too critical... I can take it... Can I add that chapter 1 of Peadar Ua Laoghaire's Mo Sgéal Féin is probably the Irish text I am most familiar with.