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The Daltaí Boards » Archive: 2005- » 2008 (March- April) » Archive through April 15, 2008 » Appreciate if someone could proof read this passage? « Previous Next »

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Posted on Monday, April 07, 2008 - 10:56 am:   Small TextLarge TextEdit Post Print Post

Hi

I was hoping someone could proof read this passage for any small grammatical errors. Thanks

Taispeánann sí an t-AMHRÁN do na páistí agus cuireann sí an póstaeir le focail suas ar gclár dubh. Tosaíonn an múinteoirí ag léamh an AMHRÁN os ard amach. Ina dhiaidh sin tosaíonn an múinteoir agus an rang go léir ag leamh an t-AMHRÁN os ard amach. Cuireann sí ceist orthu faoin AMHRÁN. Ansin cuireann sí an seinnteoir dlúthdhioscaí ar siúl agus tosaíonn sí ag canadh agus déanamh geáitsí in éineacht leis. Stopann sí an seinnteoir dlúthdhioscaí Insíonn sí do na páistí go bhfuil siad ag canadh an t-AMHRÁN in gceann cúpla nóiméad . Cuireann sí an t-AMHRÁN ar siúl arís. Spreagann sí na páistí go léir chun an AMHRÁN a canadh. Seinneann sí an seinnteoir ceithre nó cúig uair. Bainigí trail as an t-AMHRÁN. • Scríobhann na paistí an “Curfá” agus focail nua isteach ina gcóipleabhar agus na focail nua

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Posted on Monday, April 07, 2008 - 12:13 pm:   Small TextLarge TextEdit Post Print Post

póstaer
leis na focail
an múinteoir
ag léamh / ag canadh an amhráin
os ard. (gan "amach")
go mbeidh siad ag canadh
a chanadh
agus na focail
ina gcóipleabhair.

Those are the mionphointí only, as requested.

"An seanchas gearr,
an seanchas is fearr."


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Róman
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Posted on Monday, April 07, 2008 - 12:20 pm:   Small TextLarge TextEdit Post Print Post

quote:

ag léamh / ag canadh an amhráin



ag rá amhráin, b'fhéidir?

Gaelainn na Mumhan abú!

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Dennis
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Posted on Monday, April 07, 2008 - 12:32 pm:   Small TextLarge TextEdit Post Print Post

Níl aon locht ar "amhrán a chanadh". Is féidir a lán rudaí a rá i ndóigh eile, ar ndóigh.

"An seanchas gearr,
an seanchas is fearr."


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Posted on Monday, April 07, 2008 - 12:55 pm:   Small TextLarge TextEdit Post Print Post

Go raibh maith agaibh

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Posted on Monday, April 07, 2008 - 01:02 pm:   Small TextLarge TextEdit Post Print Post

"An t-amhrán" nó "an amhrán"? Níl a fhios agam..

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Dennis
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Posted on Monday, April 07, 2008 - 01:08 pm:   Small TextLarge TextEdit Post Print Post

Braitheann sé ar an gcomhthéacs.

1. as subject or object: an t-amhrán:

Taispeánann sí an t-AMHRÁN

2. in genitive, after a noun (the verbal noun in this case):

ag léamh an AMHRÁIN

3. after a preposition, the article changes (the 't' is dropped):

faoin AMHRÁN

as an AMHRÁN (NB: I missed correcting this one above.)

"An seanchas gearr,
an seanchas is fearr."


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Posted on Monday, April 07, 2008 - 07:05 pm:   Small TextLarge TextEdit Post Print Post

Thanks Dennis

You have answered by question through your explaination. Thanks agin



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