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Irish_heart
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Username: Irish_heart

Post Number: 1
Registered: 06-2007
Posted on Tuesday, June 12, 2007 - 04:16 pm:   Small TextLarge TextEdit Post Print Post

Dia duit.
Can anyone please translate this poem into Irish for me?
At night I lie awake
in the fierce Unspoken,
knowing that stars
come to life, bloom,
and die away,
like roses opening
one after another
in every point
of the Universe.

Go raibh maith agat.

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Posted on Tuesday, June 12, 2007 - 11:51 pm:   Small TextLarge TextEdit Post Print Post

Istoíche luím i mo dhúiseacht
San ríocht fíochmhar neamhráite,
Fios agam go mbeirtear réalta, go mbláthaíonn,
Agus go mbásann,
Mar rósanna ag oscailt
ina gceann 's ina gceann
I ngach áit
Ar fud na cruinne.

It's just a start, and I'm sure it can be improved upon.

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Irish_heart
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Username: Irish_heart

Post Number: 2
Registered: 06-2007
Posted on Wednesday, June 13, 2007 - 04:29 pm:   Small TextLarge TextEdit Post Print Post

Go raibh maith agat! Any more opinions?

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Posted on Wednesday, June 13, 2007 - 06:42 pm:   Small TextLarge TextEdit Post Print Post

Irish_heart, I think this is a little better.

Luím im' dhúiseacht istoíche,
San riocht fíochmhar neamhráite,
Fios a'm go mbeirtear réalta, go mbláthaíonn,
Agus go mbásann,
Mar rósanna ag oscailt,
Ceann i ndiaidh an chinn eile,
Ar fud na cruinne fré chéile.

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Irish_heart
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Username: Irish_heart

Post Number: 3
Registered: 06-2007
Posted on Thursday, June 14, 2007 - 04:22 pm:   Small TextLarge TextEdit Post Print Post

Go raibh maith agat for all your help.

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Irish_heart
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Username: Irish_heart

Post Number: 4
Registered: 06-2007
Posted on Thursday, June 14, 2007 - 04:25 pm:   Small TextLarge TextEdit Post Print Post

Go raibh maith agat for all your help.

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Irish_heart
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Post Number: 5
Registered: 06-2007
Posted on Sunday, June 17, 2007 - 11:46 am:   Small TextLarge TextEdit Post Print Post

Any more opinions please?

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Dennis
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Post Number: 3089
Registered: 02-2005


Posted on Sunday, June 17, 2007 - 11:51 am:   Small TextLarge TextEdit Post Print Post

Is maith liom an dara leagan.

"An seanchas gearr,
an seanchas is fearr."




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